Making a vodka watermelon has the same "fail". It's just straight vodka. How could we think it woulc come out tasting good? Way too strong! Much better to water-it-down with some lemonade first.
I think it could have worked, if you used a thicker material, and ironed it as you went for the nice hard lines.
That's why when I meet new people, I ask things like "what adventures have you had lately?" or "tell me what you're passionate about? ...what gets you out of bed in the morning?" instead of "where are you from?", "what do you do for work?"... dry... boring.
So many bloggers, writers, singers, actors, and personalities tell us to chase our dreams, live our life, do what we want. But how many people actually do it? It's great to see that you're still walking your own path Ori. Kudos!